by Marty | May 7, 2010 | Freelance SEO Copywriting Tips
In SEO copywriting, the way things change is pretty astounding. So here’s an SEO tip: dial it back a little.
The way I have been seeing the SERPs behave lately, they are not favoring the heavy-handed keyword slam. The opposite seems to be true.
In the past, it may have helped you to have your keyword in the meta title, alt attributes in images, and sprinkled naturally throughout your text. That hasn’t changed – all of those things are good.
What is not good, is aligning them too literally. You pound one keyword to death – at the expense of it working well anymore. Variety. It is not simply the spice of life, it is also good for your handling of keywords.
Simple Example Using Business Turtles
You have a page about business turtle resort getaways in the islands somewhere. Pretty all the time (business turtles deserve only the best). So you want to rank well for “Business Turtle Spas” and “Business Turtle Resorts” is a secondary keyphrase you target.
In the title, try: “Exotic Business Turtle Spas | Resorts for Business Turtles.”
- I have an exact match of the targeted keyword placed one word into the title.
- The preceding word is what I call a relative modifier. I think “exotic” might not have too much interference, given it is referencing a spa. In this case, one word is sufficient. A relative modifier adds just a little padding before the optimizing begins. It is worth noting if you ask me.
- I pick up the secondary keyphrase as well due to L-R word order, and scoop a few related combinations.

In the H1 tag, I don’t want to hammer the keyword to death. Try: ” A Spa and Resort Every Business Turtle Will Adore“
- I am not concerned as much with the keywords: I am aware of them. I imply them. I am after the reader here. And the bots. There’s that balance thing you need to achieve again, kids – discuss.
- You may have to come back and rework this later, to make it effective. Sweating a title is not a crime – it is what carries the power of the message many times. Think of the turtles.
- Aim it at the reader. This is on-page, so the bot becomes the passenger, behind the users and turtles. Or even I suppose is more accurate…but when in doubt, readability for the win.
- Don’t think this is not effective toward the larger keyword just because you don’t use the keyword exactly.
In the body then, it is a light, relevant sprinkling of variations and synonyms we are seeking. The title and H1 will connect with one or two mentions sprinkled naturally within a few hundred words. The rest should not be direct.
The more competitive the term, the more information the surrounding text should carry. Repetition or (shudder) density might play a SMALL part here, but it is usually small. I think, the more competitive your niche, the more unique and valuable your content must be.
Everyone with a tent on the beach will be clamoring to get a piece of the hot Business Turtle spa action. So they will repeat that term as many times as possible on a page to try to dominate. If you, instead, blend your keyword only a few times (maybe 2, maybe 3, maybe one) and keep the paragraphs on-topic, you can substitute variations of the keyword (singular for plural, synonyms) and do very well.
Worth noting, to me.
How much is too much then? You tell me.
by Marty | May 4, 2010 | Finding Freelance SEO Copywriting Work
I have been fortunate of late to be working with some great clients. And I am really happy with the work we have been able to get moving – it is very invigorating.
Clients are not cupcakes – they’re not always awesome. But
great clients can help you find new things in your writing, new passions and energies that make it all worthwhile.
The result is often the best writing you’ve done so far.
How to Find Good Clients
1. Trade awesomeness everywhere. Be the cupcake.
2. Respect and research, reach out. Engage where you belong. Give, more than take.
3. Don’t be in their face, just be available.
4. Deliver.
by Marty | Apr 17, 2010 | Freelance SEO Copywriting Tips
Here’s an SEO copywriting tip that is a little weird – if you want to improve ranking for a specific keyphrase, one good way to build on-page strength for it is through using synonyms.
“What?” your collective gasp asks breathlessly, “But what about increasing our keyword density?” (sounds of panic, anvils falling into pianos, people hurling themselves into walls and lots of self-flagellation. Sirens, mayhem, bludgeoning, chaos. Keywords, writhing on the floor, covered in blood.)
In case you have been living under a rock, keyword density is a silly way to measure your on-page strength in 2010. Heck, it was silly even when it worked, but we’ve covered that.
No, the search engines (the big G in particular) are much more shrewd these days. The algorithms are refined, and hand reviews are probably more commonplace. SPAM is much thicker, so filters and hurdles have been erected to make it at least a little challenging to rank a page.
Adding your keyphrase to a page more often is not usually going to help as much as you might want it to. Nope.
Instead, the use of synonyms, context and related terms allows you to remain on-topic and adding value without pushing the potential over-saturation of your main keyword. This can improve your pull, increase retention and can actually build page strength for the main keyphrase, believe it or not.
Let’s get a little more specific.
Ah Yes, the Prerequisite Simple Illustration
You are targeting “small business turtles” as your main keyword. Some naturally connected terms might be: turtle, corporate turtle, business reptiles, business turtle, and so on. List them, and see what you can make of them as far as search volume and competitiveness if appropriate.
Since “small business turtles” as the plural is your targeted phrase, this is the one you will have prominently in your meta title, like: Sexy Small Business Turtles | Greater Atlanta Business Turtles
I usually will include it in the meta description tag as well. Though it does not improve the ranking here, it will align in a SERP result. This makes a better connection for the user to your main point of this page: small business turtles.
The synonyms and relative terms really come into play in the body text, starting with the first header (H1, for those playing the home version).
Since we used the targeted keyphrase verbatim and partially in the title, I like to modify it in some way again in the first headline – so I might use some variation of “A business turtle” in the header to change the plural to singular, and to remove one of the targeted modifiers, maybe: “This Business Turtle Brings Atlanta New Sexiness“. Note how it stays close to the title without duplicating it – this is the key.
I believe this adds some (very little, but a plus nonetheless) value to the main phrase (the keywords are still in it, just pared down a little) while not oversaturating it and making it look spammy with yet anotherexact match.
Over-optimizing your page can result in you not achieving the results you want, and it is often hard to detect for many people. Too many exact match keyphrases is VERY easy to see: as an optimizing strategy, to penalize, or even for your competitors to duplicate.
As you roll on through the page text then, you blend in your synonyms and related words. This allows you to also more naturally get your targeted keyword in there a couple more times (still usually needed to rank), but the flow and natural feel of the content will likely be better from using the synonyms.
Since a hand reviewer is going to see the relative terms as you staying on subject and perhaps offering a bit of depth, you win. If the algorithms become smarter (and they do) and start including more semantic connections in their valuations (which they seem to be doing), you win again.
Best of all, as a user, the intent of the page (to rank for “small business turtles”) is masked behind a shroud of usefulness.
And the inherent sexiness of small business turtles, of course.
This also holds true for your anchor text of incoming links (when you can control it) – mixing it up with synonyms and variations makes them work better for most people in most situations. We’ll cover this aspect more in a later post.
Enjoy, all you turtle-lovers!
by Marty | Apr 10, 2010 | General Pearls of Wisdom
Please.
Collectively – just shut up, and think about what you want to say. Just take a second.
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Thanks. This greatly improves our chances of connecting in a meaningful way.
I recently saw a writer jump into a very tech-savvy crowd and pitch a very low-level eBook. Worse, the writer used an inanely simplistic marketing method. “Buy this color-by-numbers book, because I say I am a writer.”
This crowd and their normal discussions of online marketing were light years beyond this pitch. If it had not received the wall of indifference it ran into, this pitch may have easily been seen as a little insulting.
But the pros there did not say a thing about it.
Like a tiny fart on the breeze, this pitch was unwanted, ignored, and quickly forgotten.
Oops
The young writer unknowingly torched their own cornfield here. An inability to shut up about the obvious became the lasting impression only because this writer did not take the time to accurately understand the landscape.
Not only were no eBooks sold, but this connection was burned to the ground for this unknowing young writer because these tech-savvy folks remember bad pitches as much or more than they remember good ones. No contracts, no contacts, no progress.
Wasted spend all around, mainly because this rookie was too green to realize the useless e-book they were (re)selling was more-or-less the repackaged ideas of the very people being sold to here.
Ooops.
If you are new to the trade, chances are good you should probably shut up for a while. Same goes when you are brand new to a forum, group or association.
Read more, do some homework, and develop an understanding before you pose question one. Before you freak on that one, let me clarify.
Don’t be afraid to ask questions, even if they are unorthodox – logical questions quickly rise to the top of conversations, and for good reason. Good questions can literally build good communities.
But these are always good questions, asked after diving into the deep end once or twice to find your own pearls.
Break a few of your own eggs before you start demanding omlettes from others.
Don’t go into a new place, and just start yelling, or pitching, or spewing. Go in, feel it out, and take time to understand the natural flow. In this way, when you ask a question or offer a pitch, you are adding to what is happening, not impeding it.
Shutting-up for a minute helps.
And don’t underestimate the true reach of your online neighborhood. Anonymous nicknames can hide lots.
Just saying. This poor young writer has no idea how much potential was pooped on here.
Shutting up for just a minute first may have meant the difference – turning this lesson into a different one entirely.
by Marty | Mar 16, 2010 | Freelance SEO Copywriting Tips
Yes.
With the clear understanding that engines are useless without someone running them.
Get back to work.